Dear Samira,
Thank you for your letter. It's great to hear from an old friend. In your letter, you mentioned that your younger son Sam is coming to Bangladesh to spend his school holiday, and he needs my place as an accommodation. Unfortunately, I'm unable to host him at my place.
As you know, my building is one of the oldest building in my neighborhood. I have started renovating this building a few days back, and renovation is yet to complete. We are staying in a temporary rented place near to my house. As this temporary facility is pretty small, I'm unable to accommodate your son.
Also, as per your letter, your son wants to visit the countryside and wants to enjoy the scenic beauty of villages, I'd recommend you to ask your son to try with "Couchsurfing Travel App" in which you will see a lot of people are providing free accommodation and company while visiting the countryside of Bangladesh. If your son wants, I can ask my son to accompany him during his visit.
Again, I apologize for not being able to accommodate your son.
Your friend,
Abed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...chool holiday, and he needs my place as an accommodation. Unfortunately, Im unable to host him a...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ace as an accommodation. Unfortunately, Im unable to host him at my place. As ...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...his temporary facility is pretty small, Im unable to accommodate your son. Also...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...to enjoy the scenic beauty of villages, Id recommend you to ask your son to try wi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73157894737 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93382697517 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.042856816 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9166666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44670838999 0.216113520407 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177734515513 0.0766984524023 232% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139354733382 0.0603063233224 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262992946963 0.12726935374 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106307781433 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.