These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in their families. Other believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Exploring new country with versatile opportunities for career progression is a fad among many families. It is often opined by some, that kids always have a bright future moving abroad while others view shifting from homeland as a colossal challenge for these minions. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints and share the opinion that why it is feasible for children to settle in a new country.
Firstly, children are always in a learning phase, they are more flexible and posses better adaptability then adults. Parents, always move to a country having better education facilities as compared to current location. By having an inclusive education curriculum, a child can head start his/her learning experience in a focused way. In this way, they can hone their skills by adapting to new situations, being versatile and challenging themselves. In addition to this, they will also not burden their parents with huge tuition fees, as education is mostly government sponsored till primary level. For instance, Canada education system inclusive learning makes it most sought after destination for families to migrate.
Secondly, on the other hand, child can feel mentally sick being secluded from his/her large family of relatives and specially grandparents. They can at times miss the culture and value system of their native place. Furthermore, secluded and being in the nuclear families means not much interaction with their peer group and limited social life. This can lead to heavy addiction on smartphones and games leading to less physical activity, thus child may not cope up with very early. However this issue can be dealt by parents through mingling in similar community abroad and creating an ecosystem in which child can flourish and love can be showered at them.
To conclude, in my opinion, advantages of children prospering and adapting in a new country outweigh the challenges they may face. They can grow with better skills and more opportunities, if parents create an ecosystem in which they get all care and love.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...more, secluded and being in the nuclear families means not much interaction with their p...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... child may not cope up with very early. However this issue can be dealt by parents thro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20972644377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68233250358 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601823708207 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.5517216727 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185711223576 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618309858515 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428014332397 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115175421179 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698311455502 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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