Some people believe in the era of e-technology, printing newspapers and magazines will cease to occur in the near future .To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to few people, in coming times, digitalization of information through electronic platforms will have devastating impact on print media leading to grim chances of its survival. This essay fully disagrees to the above idea and will discuss why consuming information through electronic format is still convenient and how easily one can loose focus on these smart devices.
Firstly, digital technology is still not poised enough to present the news or view point in a structured way that would be convenient for readers .This is because majority of public have smartphones or desktops as a medium and as these gadgets have limited screen capacity it cannot showcase all information at one glance, They have a limited space to highlight few new articles on their home page. This can lead to many readers missing out on major news and articles. For example, facebook and whatsapp has to face governments wrath over the increasing trend of fake news that instigated many rumour.
Secondly, everyone cannot concentrate on electronic device for long hours as there may be many distractions such as calls, instant messaging or advertisements pop-ups. This can lead to poor reading habits especially among children who may be too young to operate such device to access opinions and editorials. To cite an example, In recent study by texas university, it was concluded that decline in readership patterns among adoloscents were related to jump in electronic consumption of newspapers.
To conclude, viability of seeking news from digital gadgets is still at nascent stage as it is still not easy to potray information in a planned way. Also, due to multiple usage of these electronic device, it is different to focus.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
According to few people, in coming times, digitaliza...
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Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...still convenient and how easily one can loose focus on these smart devices. Firstly,...
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Line 2, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...way that would be convenient for readers .This is because majority of public have ...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...y that would be convenient for readers .This is because majority of public have smar...
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Line 2, column 589, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun rumour seems to be countable; consider using: 'many rumours'.
Suggestion: many rumours
...sing trend of fake news that instigated many rumour. Secondly, everyone cannot concentrate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19064748201 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8535701653 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63309352518 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.970983477 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.3 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0247649866091 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00992924636993 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0198841970057 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0164668184936 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285213662699 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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