With the increasing globalization, companies compete each other to maintain their goodwill in the market by attracting more consumers. Nowadays companies upgrade various methods to enhance the selling of different products. I will discuss these methods in the forthcoming paragraph.
There are multifarious methods which is very beneficial for increasing the profit of companies. Firstly, promotion is the effective tool to escalating the sale of commodities which provides the information about quality and features of the product. Additionally, promotion is the only way to make better relation among companies executives and public. For instance, different stalls of the newly launched products by shops and grocery stores enable the consumers to make more familiar with products.
Secondly, to change the outlook and design of a product attracts the public to pay more attention on these products. This means the companies use innovative ideas to encourage the customers to spend more money on these products. Thirdly, various advertisement on television, commercial websites, social media and on billboards are considered to be a crucial tool to increase the marketting of a product. In today's era, companies earn more name and fame by famous celebrity to increase the demand of quality products which is very beneficial for increasing the goodwill in the eyes of public.
To sum up, there are several methods which are used by companies to improve the selling system. However, in my opnion, advertisement is the prominent tool to aware the society about newly launched products. Majority of citizens are illiterate and also unable to use the shopping website. So, in this case, advertisement is the best method to promote selling with the help of visuals and images also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...a, companies earn more name and fame by famous celebrity to increase the demand of quality produ...
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Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ing with the help of visuals and images also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as to, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42805755396 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93687578506 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528776978417 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2221500721 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280307712578 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995584694537 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896142756888 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17996491881 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681448778012 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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