In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.
Some doctors believe that try to travel in different parts of the world and always they advise for trip. So, once I asked that a doctor why always prescribe people or especially old people to travel in different countries, or even travel to villages. So, doctor explained me if you want to live longer try to do travel. So, I believe that people are living longer now. Because, more travel, they access good hospitals drugs and doctors and another important thing I believe it is technologies in different parts of life.
First, nowadays people travel in different parts of world. Or travel to countryside and this phenomenon help them to live longer and change their spiritual and help them to forget the sadness. Once our family doctor advise my father for travel because it help him to forget some mentally problem. Travel help us to know different cultures and people and find new method to cure our illness. For instance, depression, stress. Travel a cause to live longer and I love travel it helps us to live longer.
Second, in new century people live longer due to they have access modern hospitals and doctors. So, they use different kinds of drugs. For instance, one member of our family has difficult illness doctors call that diphtheria. However, doctors’ advise him some modern drugs and after few months now he is well healthy and back to his life. So, I believe that people are living longer now. Modern hospitals with new doctors and best drugs with high qualities are help people to live longer. And I don’t love to live short.
Third, technologies another impacts of that people are living longer. For instance, if we are ill and cannot visit a doctor. So, it is not important because if we have access internet we can ask for prescribe, or ask a solution the google well show or direct us in right way. Or, if you have not access your family doctor you can ask doctor to use social communications like, Viber, Telegram, Skype… so, we can say that people are living longer now because they have access different technologies to solve their problem.
To sup up, we have a proverb that say “better situation you can living longer” nowadays people access different things like modern hospitals with modern drugs and well educated doctors and it is helpful for people to living longer. So, they can travel in different parts of world and countryside by different technologies like, cars, airplane, train, metro… however, these things are really lovely and help people to live longer and better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u want to live longer try to do travel. So, I believe that people are living longe...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chnologies in different parts of life. First, nowadays people travel in differe...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
... advise my father for travel because it help him to forget some mentally problem. Tr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ove travel it helps us to live longer. Second, in new century people live longe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... And I don't love to live short. Third, technologies another impacts of t...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'accessed'.
Suggestion: accessed
...ct us in right way. Or, if you have not access your family doctor you can ask doctor t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t technologies to solve their problem. To sup up, we have a proverb that say &a...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...that say 'better situation you can living longer' nowadays people access dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, second, so, third, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86374133949 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49248506494 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406466512702 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8148619353 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0416666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70833333333 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267705503111 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108488922642 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114051569492 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173230129896 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380068507909 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.