There are serious concern about sale and production of genetically modified food. Yet this is necessary if we are to meet demands of an increasing World population. What is your opinion about thiis topic?
In recent years, people have consumed genetically modified food almost twice as much as the previous decade, causing concerns about it to appeared more often. It can not be denied that GM food is the best solution for the food crisis, however, in terms of health, some argue that it causes many underlying illness, which have a huge impact on future generation. I agree with both statements, some of the main reasons discussed below will explain that.
In the context of traditional farming, farmers have to pay a lot for things. In return, the production and profit they receive annually are too low. The purpose of GM food was originally born to help them exploit the maximum benefit in farming. In fact, a huge amount of GMO is consumed all over the world, especially in Africa, Asia and Middle East countries, where for most of the residents here, poverty hunger and backward cause food resources become scarce, valuable and difficult to access. As expected, the globe issue about the lack of food was resolved positively by GMO. Agricultural profits have also improved. But is GMO a sustainable solution?
Negative aspects appeared when the consumers gradually realized that their quality of health is really downgraded compared to the previous generation, whom, despite their nutritional deficiencies an meals, are not as regular as current, they rarely get sick or use antibiotic. Along with many information sources is approached or widely disseminated by scientists, the doubt about GM food has become more and more widespread, discussion have become fierce controversies and disagreements. Up to now, there has not been any concrete evidence to prove that GMO cause diseases, cause genetic changes and premature death for humans. However, no one can simultaneously make sure the consequences are not caused by GMO. What if the amount of money spent on studies of negative effect of GMO is provided by multinational corporation? The intervention force scientists to change the way that information reached the masses and made them misunderstand that GM food cause little harm or even harmless. By doing so, they earned super profit for themselves from taking advantage of consumer trust and I'm afraid that in the near future, they may hold the control of life when those corporation is the proprietary place for GMO.
It is undeniable that GMO bring more profitable than traditional agricultural for farmers, but it just true at the beginning. The monopoly of owning GM food inventories has caused agriculturalists a lot for seed, some of them even fall into debt. For them now, GMO seem to become the biggest fear. Beside, these modified foods almost lose the evolving ability to adapt to the environment compared to the traditional vegetation. That makes the pure genome of species and biodiversity on the Earth threatened.
To sum up, future health or current needs are the main reason why GM food themselves contain a huge dangers. To balance that, the government should immediately enact stricter laws to force corporation which own GMO to be more honest and responsible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this corporation' or 'those corporations'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 506.0 315.596192385 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12252964427 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86308734307 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 176.041082164 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579051383399 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 814.5 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2280550504 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45833333333 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100268186862 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281164343951 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372814570127 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0592000954477 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320987844822 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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