Demand for food is increasing worldwide.
What is the cause of this?
What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
The population in world is sky rocketed day by day with the growing population there is increasing in the demand of foods and services. Increasing demand for foods will bring out various problems. Thus, international community should be aware about the situation and make sure to supply the foods meeting up with the demand.
Firstly, The main cause of increasing demand for food is the rise in the population. People are aware about family planning but still they are not following it. People are wasting foods, which is one of the ultimate cause of increase in demand. Today generation are not consuming food they are wasting it, they are taking one two spoon and they deny to have it by blaming that its not tasty or its oily and so on. For example in hotel we can see in the dumping area large about of vegetables and other foods are dumped thus, its will bring the problem of food crisis.
Secondly, International community should promote farmers, Providing lone with no % will help them to work and grow crops this will solve the major problem of food crisis in future. Providing good water source in agriculture place. Creating machine to cut down the crops and instead of using cattle and other medicine to make soil fertile to grow crops. For example awareness program related food crisis should be done, aware people to save food not to waste them. Government should mainly focus to develop agriculture sector in order to full fill all the need and supply on time.
To sum up, I believe not only international community but we local community should also put hand together to save the planet from hunger and be part of it to maintain good environment in the world where there will not be empty stomach while sleeping.
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| 2019-09-23 | Gurvi singh | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'spoon' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'spoons'.
Suggestion: spoons
...are wasting it, they are taking one two spoon and they deny to have it by blaming tha...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny having'.
Suggestion: deny having
... they are taking one two spoon and they deny to have it by blaming that its not tasty or its...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...tables and other foods are dumped thus, its will bring the problem of food crisis. ...
^^^
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... solve the major problem of food crisis in future. Providing good water source in agricul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76158940397 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40218234493 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9727656311 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310455854134 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111325208317 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877262672249 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179015854562 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092875088271 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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