Some people find history a fascinating subject. Others say it is dull and has no place in modern life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People today have own perspective in interpreting social change by means of historical changing. This can be seen from the way they do in social practices including education, business, and entertainment.
Concerning on the way people do their social practices, doing education, firstly, is one of the parameter to look at how people see the meaning of history. For example, some people think that in doing education, we need not to consider more deeply about history or past, but we have to look at the improvement in which we can produce as a new one. However, other people think that remembering the past is one of the spirits that can give a way to produce things better. It is clear that people have different background knowledge of how to produce and how to increase things for the next.
Secondly, doing business is crucial social practice to think over because people have different approach in reaching their goals by means of business income. Today, many businessmen try to replace the old building by the new one in order to do their business needs such as building a new mall or an apartment. On the other hand, this is totally refused because the old building is one of the things that have to keep their history by means of things which have to remember all the time as well as tourism.
The last essential part of social practice is doing entertainment. This point, people also have own way to get an entertainment. As an illustration, some people today go to the kinds of new entertainments embody going to cinema or going vocation to beach such as Bali, a part of Indonesia. However, other people avoid these kinds of activity by visiting museums by meas of while vocation we are able to learn about the history.
Indeed, we cannot judge automatically the way people think; so that, we should to see the background knowledge of the people or their own orientation. Regarding to this issue, I prefers to spend my time by getting various knowledge and experience by visiting the old buildings.
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