is joint family necessary today?
Recently, the concepts of the nuclear family and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. although contested by many that in comparison to the nuclear family, a joint family could bring many benefits to society, such topic is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by substantial numbers of individuals. I profoundly inclined to believe that the joint family is the need of the hour, and this essay will examine this view before concluding.
From the development standpoint, a joint family can provide society with some noticeable positive impacts, which are rooted in the fact that relatives, as well as family members, are extremely bound up. From my own experience when I was a college student, I performed a survey about the joint family which revealed that person staying in the joint family was happier and well behaved than those staying in a nuclear family. A joint family has benefits like social gathering, ample time, care and enthusiasm. A joint family inculcates sharing of joy and sorrow. Thus, the beneficial ramification of the joint family apparently can be seen.
On the contrary, few people believe that the nuclear family gets personal space, privacy and independence. However, this can be achieved in the joint family too, by mutual understanding and interaction. nuclear family faces a lot of issues like no helping hands, loneliness and less family time are major drawbacks of a nuclear family. Ignorance is another challenge faced by the nuclear family.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that although some opponents tend to believe that nuclear family is enough for an individual to be prepared, I strongly tend to believe that joint family has many advantages which outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nuclear
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, so, thus, well, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26334519573 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85920416229 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551601423488 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.073737108 50.4703680194 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342510410342 0.242375264174 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149782675093 0.0925447433944 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655700102794 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220040276203 0.151781067708 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757162818676 0.0609392437508 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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