Write a letter to the store manager informing him that you aren't happy with your recent purchase of the monitor from that store.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my recent purchase of a monitor from you. The device keeps turning off and turns back on which is very annoying while I am doing my project at home. I hope you will consider my situation favourably.
Let me explain my situation in detail. I bought the monitor from your store a couple of months back. While it worked properly in the initial few days, it began to cause trouble after three weeks to be precise. The monitor keeps turning off and after a while turns back on again by itself. Not only am I losing precious time with this trouble, I am lagging on my project and the deadline to finish the project is coming soon.
Would you be kind enough to replace the monitor? The item is under warranty for six months and it has only been 2 months from the date of purchase till now. I have a tight deadline to finish my project and hence I would request you to replace the item as soon as you possibly can.
Thank you for your consideration
Yours sincerely
Sai Karne
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| 2019-04-24 | sai girish | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35858585859 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23242035531 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9191687444 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9166666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207478331665 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804049472565 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876836827229 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126100109866 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222225708672 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.