Write a letter to the magazine editor, acknowledging him of his latest magazine and also suggest what would you like to see in the next magazine.
Dear Sir / Madam,
I’m writing to let you know that I’ve read your latest magazine “Sports World”. I like reading sports materials and books and opted to read this book after seeing so many positive reviews about it over the social media. After reading this book, I was quite impressed with the magazine as I never felt bored of any of the content in it.
Let me explain this to you in detail. The book consists of facts and realities of today’s competitive world. It has been very well organised and versatile in nature. I was happy to read the real life background of all the sports superstars before they arrived on the big stage. However, the only issue I came across with this magazine is it does not cover all the sports; it is restricted to only four varieties of sports.
I’d like to suggest you that it will be more beneficial for the reader if all the varieties of sports are covered in your next magazine so that the reader does not have to go through any other magazine.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Sai Karne
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| 2019-04-27 | sai girish | 82 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...essed with the magazine as I never felt bored of any of the content in it. Let me ex...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...with the magazine as I never felt bored of any of the content in it. Let me explain t...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55161353142 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626315789474 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6036880438 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162961029211 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051535010226 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537699682511 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10227376206 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546538350503 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.