from my perspective, I do not agree totally with the claim that meaningful features of the nation are only observed in its big cities. Although it is no doubt that the major cities have many figures for finding the important characteristics, there are still other factors.
on the one hand, in term of big cities, nowadays in the age of global modernization, the urban area is a place to easily approach the significant characters of a nation. One of the reason is that most citizens, who consist the society actually, live in a metropolis. The lifestyle of citizens is one of the indispensable checkpoints when we investigate a nation. As the city where many fundamental buildings, technology, art or even politics assemble such as subway, market, theater, etc. For examples, when we come to France, we do not need to go many places just stay and conquest in Paris then you almost know the beauty and main features of France such as they have many unique and magnificent buildings and also feel the romance inside French people.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that it would be narrowed-mind when we just examine the metropolitan city if we want to explore more about the main characteristics of a country. There are few reasons why I do not agree with the given statement, the primary reason is that not even in the big cities which have many skyscrapers, politics or people, but also in the rural areas we could find many interesting things which are preserved through many generations. That must be significant cultural factors we need to study. Like in Vietnam, for example, is a developing country, there is still many unique customs in the countryside which is more attractive experts from abroad to study than in the big cities, such as the custom making a square sticky rice in Tet holiday which is an important holiday marking the end of the year following the lunar calendar often happens in February, making this cake carries many means which reveals the respect for ancestors or the hopes a considerable fortune in the coming year. In addition, the big cities today do not have differences between the other cities from other countries cause the globalization making every the city have same infrastructure such high building, high way, the chains of designed clothed, entertainment place or traffic system. To illustration, Disneyland was one of the most noticeable images of America but in the present, we could go to Disneyland Park in Japan, Australia or Singapore and acquire the same experience when an American one.
In conclusion, as we can see that to understand the important characteristics of society one need to study both city and rural areas. As society is not only about the buildings, the traffic system, but also the culture and life in a rural place.
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppo 66
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.Write a response in which you discuss the ext 50
- "A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college." - Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the posi 58
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppo 58
- "Of the two leading real estate firms in our town — Adams Realty and Fitch Realty — Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was 86
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, still, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88842105263 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86416855228 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509473684211 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.351534492 60.3974514979 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.8 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 23.4991977007 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17260569532 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545540984208 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422635453729 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102875604221 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02100274154 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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