In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
Nowadays, parents are more concerned about the safety of teenagers playing outside especially during the night. Some people think that they should not be let alone outside during late evening others feel that they should be allowed to play outside without any restrictions. This essay will discuss the importance of curfew on teenagers when they are outdoors during the night.
The adults accompanying the teenager at a particular time in the evening is paramount to keep them Safe from child abusers and drug dealers. Most of the drug dealers venture out during the dusk time to avoid being identified. They lure children to come along with them by offering them expensive gifts. Children are too young to understand the intentions of such people and often fall into their trap. For example, according to a research conducted by private organization it is revealed that every year many teenagers in the US are often victims of such abusers. Perhaps, the one of the ways to prevent such cases from occurring in future is to accompany the child when they are outdoors during the night.
Teenagers usually play outdoor games like basket ball and soccer. They are so much involved in the game that they are often unaware of the surroundings. Moreover, some areas are not well-lighted during the nights and there are some instances where they have got hurt due to accidents while playing. Accompanying Adults will always make sure that the children is not venturing out of play area during the game and hurting himself. Also, adults can get immediate help to children in case they get hurt.
This essay discussed how teenager are safe when they are accompanied by adults especially during the night. In my opinion, the parent should always accompany children when venture out during the night.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02341137124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47180496817 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9065501755 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261019176294 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893721717086 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519782298821 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168029554527 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180195399348 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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