The given diagram illustrates the typical process of the modern manufacture of canned fruit. The process through various steps, the brief rundown has three major steps, from collecting the fresh fruit at the farm to delivering to their final destination, be it a supermarket or store.
The first step is harvesting the fruits and carrying them to a factory. Initially, the fresh fruit, which is ripe in a suitable time, collected carefully by hand and the large of part actually is the tropical fruits. After that, all of them are transported to a factory.
The second stage is the preliminary fruits with six consecutive actions. Firstly, the fruits are cleaned by a washing system. Every of fruit is then checked the quality so they are certainly not having any corruptive things or the insect inside. Once the fruit has cooled down and keep freshmen by cold storage. The fruit, which has a reasonable weight, are chosen and graded to remove poor quality ones. After which, qualities fruit is peeled the outside shells and cored the seeds if they have.
The last step puts in cans by an automatic machine and sends the produce for sale. In the first place, the slight pieces are canned and sealed in the iron boxes, followed by cooking these boxes by a special heating process. Their outwards are more likely to attract by labeling on around the body of boxes. Ultimately, they need to stock on pallets and wait for orders as well as they are distributed to store via truck.
In summary, thanks to modern machines, canned fruit becomes to produce with consistency level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nation, be it a supermarket or store. The first step is harvesting the fruits and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, well, in summary, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84814814815 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47159167989 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7639286677 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8125 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0938903538248 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331819807404 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266415052791 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492127320891 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299117889887 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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