Over the past decades, the greener planet Earth has changed in unprecedented pace with so many progression in many nations worldwide. This transition and development often generate international setback such as the term "global warming", is not a new phenomenon but a real and serious world issue that must require immediate attention. To my knowledge, there is only one reason for the increasing rate of Earth's average temperature.
To start with, global warming is caused mainly by human activity. One significant example is in the realm of Agriculture and forestry. Various businesses have devoured the world's resources by cutting down trees to make huge profit. Trees played crucial role in human's life, not only to shield from solar radiation, but more importantly they absorbed greenhouse gases which include carbon dioxide, methane and chlorofluorocarbons that traps in the atmosphere responsible for warming the planet.
Another human activity that relates to global warming is transportation. Most people own more than two cars for their family need. Automobiles in the road pollute air by emitting fossil fuels: petroleum and diesel, containing high quantity of carbon dioxide. As a result, the more greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, the more dramatic the effect.
There are effective strategies in reducing the amount of carbon footprints that lead to the worsening of global warming. One is by planting copious quantity of trees particularly in urban settings and woodlands. People may also contribute by using public transports in lieu of utilizing their own car. In these initiatives, our active participation can help reduce the rising global warming scale.
To conclude, the foremost reason of global warming is anthropological in nature. Planting trees is highly recommended to everyone. Without these biggest plants ever existed, the planet Earth will be hotter similar to Mars.
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun progression seems to be countable; consider using: 'many progressions'.
Suggestion: many progressions
...s changed in unprecedented pace with so many progression in many nations worldwide. This transit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54761904762 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03795578368 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8815424255 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6111111111 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215830708889 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659410701433 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715311163963 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112324269826 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337154578903 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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