The following report appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council.
"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds represent the most frequently given reason for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid—a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil—as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
This argument is flawed for numerous reasons. Primarily , the argument is based on unwarranted assumption that the Adam's reality is better than Fitch's reality, rendering its main conclusion , that you should sell your house through Adam's.
First, the argument is fail to provide any justification that time taken to sell the house is less now by adams irrespective of population at 10 year back.More Importantly , there is not detail present in argument regarding population which are looking for houses. it might be possible that people are not that much needy of house. Almost all are settled. As time passes , Population figures also changes , More people started living in the town . Most of them are hunting for house as they are living as tenant.
Second , Assumptions made on sell happen 10 years by Fitch's. If argument would have data which explains the time taken by Adam.s 10 years back, can stand out firmly.Likely , there is no data available for fitch's time to sell house now.This is a vague comparison.
Because the argument makes some unwarranted assumptions , it fails to make a convincing case that we sould sell our houses through Adam's.
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- The following report appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council."An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby 16
- "Of the two leading real estate firms in our town — Adams Realty and Fitch Realty — Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last 33
- "Of the two leading real estate firms in our town — Adams Realty and Fitch Realty — Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last 33
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 11.1786427146 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 55.5748502994 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 2260.96107784 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 441.139720559 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06315789474 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68866293181 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.468620217663 136% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 705.55239521 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 76.3363609298 57.8364921388 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.324526521 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.70786347227 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0112212050783 0.218282227539 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00444588365738 0.0743258471296 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0133376509721 0.0701772020484 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0111147091434 0.128457276422 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192512409478 0.0628817314937 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 98.500998004 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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