Write a letter to your friend with whom you spent a weekend participating party regarding his relocation to new house. In the letter you should
- Describe what you liked the most at their new apartment
- Why did you like the weekend?
- When and where do you want to meet them again?
Dear Parth,
I am delighted to write this letter regarding the party we enjoyed last weekend together at your new house.
The house you have purchased is very spacious with balcony and it is very advantageous to enjoy beautiful city from it. The windows are arranged and designed in such a way that most of the rooms remain full with cool breeze air and sun light throughout the day.
It is great pleasure for me that you have moved nearby us. The party that you have thrown was very delightful and I memorized and cherished all our companionship of college life. The most memorable thing was the delicious "Pav-Bhaji" made by your mother for which I am fond of during college time.
As you came near to me, I would like to invite all your family members on next weekend to enjoy dinner together.
Have a great and glorious life ahead with me in this city.
Yours lovingly,
Maulik B Patel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65838509317 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.660851007 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1047857708 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266274812395 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968248242489 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702267861402 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135959783978 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755942446811 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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