The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvements were made to the transport network, and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.
I would like to describe the table and the bar chart. Firstly, the table is to measure how journey times in a city centre changes after improvements were made to transport network. This table is divided into two measurement which are avarage journey time before and after improvements of the some kinds of transportation such as tram, bus, taxi, and car. Because of the purpose of these improvements is to make transportation network better so the improvements are not just to make transportation in this case, faster but there are also transportations that after improvement are become slower. All of them are happened maybe for making integrated trasportation. Secondly, the bar chart that explains about the cost of using transportation after improvements.
According to the table about how journey times in a city center changed, we shall see that the tram has the highest improvement of speed which is 6 minutes faster. Before improvement tram have journey time 22 minutes and now it is just 16 minutes. The second is placed by bus which is faster for 5 minutes. Before improvement bus have journey time 28 minutes and after is 23 minutes. In contrast, The transportations that improve slower which are taxi and car. The taxi after improvement becomes 3 minutes slower. Morover, the car after improvement becomes 5 minutes slower
According to the bar chart about the cost of using transportation after improvement we shall see that The cheapest price is placed by the bus that we have to pay almost 0.40 euro per kilometer. The second cheapest is placed by the Tram that almost 0.60 euro per kilometer. The third cheapest is placed by the car that almost 1. 00 euro per kilometer. The last as the most expensive one is taxi which is 1.80 euro per kilometer.
If we compare all of data in both of table and bar chart, we shall see that after improvement bus is the cheapest transportation eventhough the bus is not the slowest in journey time. In addition, The taxi still the fastest and the most expensive transportation.
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