Few poeple devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what iffect this has on individual and society in general.
More and more people are sacrificing their hobbies on order to devote more time to work and to do other secondary things like surfing on internet and watching television. The consequence is detrimental to both individual and society.
The immediate cause of not spending time on hobbies is the adoption of hectic schedule by the working class. Due to the long working hours, people are left with little time to do things which actually gives them happiness. Even the competition to get a promotion in a job is adding fuel to the fire and making the situation worse. For instance, one of my colleague, even after getting selected in a team did not participate in a tournament because he could not afford to miss the weekly official meeting with the employer. Another prime factor due to which hobbies are taking a backseat in people life is their misconception that pursuing their hobby as a profession will not earn them hefty amount of money.
This trend is causing damage to the individual both on the personal as well as on professional basis. As an old saying quotes "all work but no play makes the jack a dull boy", what this means is that if a person does not take a break from work to enjoy himself than ultimately he will end up as a less creative and more frustated human being. This will drastically affect his performance at work. Not only this, a slave to the work can never make quality relationship with his colleagues. Hence, he becomes not only a less peoductive man but also a bad co-worker. Another harm which avoidance of hobbies does is affecting mental and physical fitness. Leisure time activities are imperative for a person to rejuvinate himself. As the adage goes "a sound mind lives in a sound body" so it is necessary to participate in outdoor hobbies like sports otherwise an adult is not doing justice to his body and mind.
To conclude, in the race to earn money a get promotions, many persons forget that real prospeeity is in doing things which they feel thrilled to do. That is the reason so many unhappy faces is the common sight nowadays.
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- Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past.This behaviour is now having a negative imapact on society.Discuss 89
- It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30,as this is best both for the individual and for the society.Do you agree or disagree? 61
- It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30,as this is best both for the individual and for the society.Do you agree or disagree? 61
- Few poeple devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what iffect this has on individual and society in general. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... to the individual both on the personal as well as on professional basis. As an old saying...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, second, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73024523161 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66034958722 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574931880109 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1617941098 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.117647059 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145068888652 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456459486035 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343857775251 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750936138218 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411450820152 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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