A or D? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than it was in the past.
Contrary to the popular belief that it is much easier to maintain good health in the modern society than it was in the past, I honestly believe it is as difficult for people to stay healthy now as it was for their counterparts in the past.
In previous times, the distribution of medical service was not so extensive, a direct result of which was when people fell ill, they would have difficulties in finding a clinic or hospital in their neighborhood. Particularly, in the case of someone accidentally infected by a severe virus or regularly tortured by deadly cancer, it would take that person several months or probably nearly one year to find the right hospital that can conduct certain surgeries or developments in medicine still led to residents’ sufferings from illness. Worse of all, in a society where neither was wealth distributed broadly, large amounts of people in the past were unable to afford the medicines they were in need of. Nor were they able to provide their body with necessary nutrients by making healthy food choices---no adequate money, no appropriate food.
In our era, however, although improvements in medicine and higher standards of living seem to have eliminated the difficulties past generations once encountered, difficulties in maintaining good health still stand in the way. Aren’t today’s people under more pressure and thus more psychologically unhealthy? Don’t today’s people fall ill more often than did their counterparts in the old days? Economic and social development, apparently, comes hand-in-hand with environmental deterioration and pollution. The air we breathe, the water we drink, and the food we eat become heavily contaminated. Various kinds of pollution can trigger heart attacks, strokes, and irregular heart rhythms, particularly in people already at risk for these conditions. True, medication or treatment work better nowadays, but increased risks of different diseases still make it harder for modern people to maintain good health.
In a nutshell, despite the fact that health is one of the things most valued by human beings, it is not so easy to maintain good health for people in the past as well as people in the current society.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement For success in school and work the ability to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance is more important than having excellent knowledge of a job or in a field of study Use specific reas 42
- A or D? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than it was in the past. 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, honestly, however, if, so, still, thus, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26404494382 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04462247983 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598314606742 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4201697561 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.153846154 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273777298565 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885440286805 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119788425637 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210318358364 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133763773329 0.0645574589148 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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