Advertisements are supposed to be the form of mass communication. presently, advertisements play a pivotal role to uplift the standard of shopping. It has been extremely debatable whether advertisements are designed to cater the real needs of society or to allure people towards products by hook or by crook. Here, I would like to accord with given statement.
Numerous points can be put down to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, in order to practice the clever strategies for boosting sales of goods, manufacturing companies hire prominent clebrities as a brand ambassdors to advertise...
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Sentence: First and foremost, in order to practice the clever strategies for boosting sales of goods, manufacturing companies hire prominent clebrities as a brand ambassdors to advertise their products.
Error: clebrities Suggestion: celebrities
Error: ambassdors Suggestion: ambassadors
Sentence: Moreover, telecasting of two in one, win bumper prizes, one get, one free are evident factors of clever corporate world's tecticts.
Error: tecticts Suggestion: tactics
Sentence: Last but not least, other aspects of ploy involving gorgeous packaging of things, music beats, combination of color contrast, high defination representation of adverts are also taken into account to prompt people of all age groups.
Error: defination Suggestion: definition
Sentence: However, instead of catering real needs of societies, major objective of grinding own axes is being excercised by the good's companies.
Error: excercised Suggestion: exercised
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