integRATED ESSAY -TPO 40
Both the reading and the listening discuss colonizing venus. The reading mentions that living on venus is hardly possible to maintain a human presence by following three reasons that will support the following paragraph, but the listening cast doubt on each reason made by reading.
Firstly, the passage supports the idea that venus' the atmospheric pressure of surface is greater than the Earth's surface by around 90 times. this challenged by lecturer by mentioning that only surface pressure is great to compare with atmospheric pressure, which is soft. Thus the spacecraft can safely stay in the area of atmospheric condition that is similar to Earth's surface pressure.
Secondly, the passage adds about common chemical elements, such as carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid that exist on the venus-impossible to live longer without water. However, the listening suggests that importance of the elements mentioned in the passage which are basic elements make water.
Third, the reading passage claims that the atmospheric cloud of venus reflects the 60 percent of the sunlight; hence it will be really cold to exist by using 40 percent of sunlight. this claim refutes by the professor for emphasizing that the reflection of the sunlight is possible to use for gaining fuel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... the Earths surface by around 90 times. this challenged by lecturer by mentioning th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...th atmospheric pressure, which is soft. Thus the spacecraft can safely stay in the a...
^^^^
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... exist by using 40 percent of sunlight. this claim refutes by the professor for emph...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, really, second, secondly, so, third, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30243902439 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69760949103 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59512195122 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2686126367 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.777777778 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06452816374 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257079949079 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998781303775 0.0996497079465 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473392360751 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138507267343 0.162205337803 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210153330166 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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