There is no doubt that nowadays educational systems in every government plays a pivotal role in every society, and no one could deny this fact. A vast majority of people, especially the older ages, are of the opinion that the teachers are not appreciated as past. I, contrary to popular belief, contend that teachers are well-known not only by the society, but also by parents.
One of the reasons coming to my mind at first is that there is a need to every government, no matter it is developing or developed, to boost its educational system as a crucial factor to be account for a high rank community for living. To shed light on his issue, take United States as an example. Yesterday, when I was reading a piece of news of Forbes magazine, I found that more than 70 percent of government budget is dedicated to the educational infrastructures of this country. Furthermore, it is a mean for acknowledging the teachers' position.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my stance on this subject is that nowadays families are completely aware of effective education in their children's future. In essence, thanks to elevation in psychological awareness in people, current parents are more concern about their children's feeling and behavior. In addition, they pay more attention to teachers of their children's education whether they are in elementary school or in high school. A study conducted by a group of researchers in Oxford University, indicate that in past decade teachers' discontent are 10 percent more than its present.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that teachers and educators are more acknowledged than before. However, that was a story in nutshell. Actually, there are more reasons and samples elaborating on this issuer which is not mentioned here due to the shortage of time. Finally, it is anticipated that governments and society are going to more acclaim the educational effects, indeed, the teachers’ position day after day.
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- TPO 54 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, so, well, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09337349398 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01497899581 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5461521533 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156930777561 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519357691669 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499714577714 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092361715918 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433893349455 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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