TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a shadow of the doubt, having a comfortable life play a vital role in social development and progress. People who live in a good condition can do many helpful actions for their country. Many people contend that life today is easier and more comfortable than past, while others assert that when our grandparents were children life was easier than now. Both of the opposing arguments appear to be somewhat convincing and stand to point. However, my personal experience and actual observation of life have led me to agree tat life today is easier comparet to the past. In the ensuing lines, I delve into several reasons to substantiate my point.
The first and possibly the paramount consequential reason is that currently there are a lot of advanced devices. For example, my mother has plenty of electrical devices in her kitchen for washing clothes and dishes, or for cooking. So, she can do these works quickly without being nervous. In contrast, my grandmother states that doing these amount of works was very hard for him especially with two kids. As you can see, nowadays, life is easier.
Another point springing to mind is travel. Imagine the number of transportation vehicles that we have now such as airplains, tains, buses, cars and even cars without drivers. These days, the world alerts swiftly and humankind experiences a huge enhancement and achievement including transportation. As a result, by having these fast vehicles we can move from one place to another place just in hours, but this option was not available in past. As a result, I belive today life is comfortable in compered to the past. This progressive world not only assists people to be more comfortable but also creates a big opportunity to build and detect other useful devices for their lives.
To sum it all up, it is easy to see the advantages of living now in comparison with living past. Today people because of access to advanced devices can do their actions soon and in a simple way. Also, they can move from one place to another just in hours by having modern vehicles. I hope someday we can improve our knowledge in various field like healthcare devices to have more comfortable life even better than now!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ours, but this option was not available in past. As a result, I belive today life is co...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d devices can do their actions soon and in a simple way. Also, they can move from one place to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65582552643 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564986737401 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.476124704 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9523809524 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182254126071 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535380283887 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694554594447 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112039915355 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680563104578 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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