Traveling is the most popular hobbies in the work. Visiting new places and meeting different people could be some of the reasons why people like to travel. With the advent of new technologies, people can afford to travel long distances. Some argue that the best way is to travel with an organized group. While others may hold the different opinion that traveling alone is more fun. From my perspective, the former view carried more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, traveling with an organized group is very convenient. When people travel with group tour controlled by a tour guide, all the problems will be taken care by the group organizer. People do not have to deal with all the problems throughout the trip. For example, I went to Egypt last year, and I did not book for any tour group. I went there by myself and thereby, I had spent several hours for booking hotels in a different location. My purpose was to relax and enjoy visiting new places for the first time. However, I did not enjoy, as much as I thought, due to some vital problems. Since I did not know the language and regulations of the new places, I had a hard time communicating with local people there. I wondered if I had traveled with a tour guide, I did not have to encounter such issues. Hence, traveling with a group is best.
Furthermore, traveling with a group is more efficient. Since people do not know about the new environment, they may not find interesting places there. Therefore, people have to spend several hours searching for a map on the internet. Sometimes, they will need to ask for guidance to local people. The previous example can be considered here to exemplify too. In my travel to Egypt, I had spent a substantial amount of time locating for the places. That was troublesome, and I could not afford to visit so many places which I had in my list. On the contrary, If I travel with the tour group, the tour guide already familiar with the places and addresses. Consequently, I can visit more places by joining a tour group.
Moreover, traveling with a group is more fun and comfortable. Since the tour guide has all the detailed information about all the places, a tour guide can provide extra information such as Egyptian history, the sites from where all the artifacts were found and so on. On top of that, a tour guide can plan exactly about every location, and how much time tourists would require at particular place. Thus, tourists can enjoy the trip without having any trouble.
All in all, I strongly believe that travel with a tour group is certainly more convenient. This is because it adds up more enjoyment when you have all organized plan by a tour guide, and it makes your trip much more convenient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s and meeting different people could be some of the reasons why people like to travel. With...
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Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y is to travel with an organized group. While others may hold the different opinion t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, such as, on the contrary, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64417177914 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59019893519 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456032719836 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.493208425 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.96875 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.28125 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90625 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297944619023 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097853317016 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101413798218 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1829772646 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565699771934 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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