The advent of technology advancement has made the world drastically transformed in such a short period of time. This development has widely affected people's lives. Some argue that people are less satisfied with this development in the present days. While others have the opposite idea that people are more satisfied and happier in the present days with this accelerating world. From my perspective, the latter view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, the most individuals would agree with the notion that modern technology is kicking everyone's door, and because of technology has been constantly providing better and newer products at a fast pace, the life has become much easier compared to the older days. For instance, in the early days, people supposed to walk several kilometers in search of fresh drinking water, and there was no electricity supply were provided in their houses. Also, there was a poor transportation system provided by the government in the country. All these reasons, parents were not capable of providing higher education to their children. However, in current days, all these facilities are provided in their residential place. People have drinking water facility, and they do have twenty-four hours of electricity available in their houses. Thus, technology has been improved so much that makes lives simple and less complicated.
Furthermore, there is no doubt that lives have become healthier today than before. The development of medical devices and the advent of new drug formulas have drastically changed the field of medicine. To illustrate more thoroughly, the scientist has found a new medical technique and new drug formulas which can fight against some fatal conditions such as cancer and aids. My aunt was diagnosed with breast cancer last year, but she had gone through chemotherapy treatment and some other medical procedure. Although she is totally recovered now, and she would not be afraid of relapsing her diseases in future. So, she can live her life happily which would not have been not possible ten years back because there was not such treatments and techniques available at that time.
Moreover, getting a good job was always been an issue in past days. Today, there are more job positions available for people who have pursued higher education. On top of that, all these companies are provided a high salary to their employees. Consequently, people would be able to afford a high living standard. For example, my friend was working on an assignment and he found that on average 85% of people have been living in a better way in current days than before. Hence, development has occurred in every field, and because of that standard of living is improved too.
In summation, from all aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that people are completely satisfied with their lives in present days. This is because technology has improved our lifestyle, and people live longer due to recent inventions occur in the field of medicine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...drastically transformed in such a short period of time. This development has widely affected p...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...not be afraid of relapsing her diseases in future. So, she can live her life happily whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2551.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17444219067 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69861506651 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511156186613 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 796.5 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0677023104 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4814814815 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2592592593 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.37037037037 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228054166473 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613825950842 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502229447773 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135638234015 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044399932387 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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