"Although abuse of the system are inevitable, social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society"
Discuss.
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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Read this essay to improve your writings. "Although abuse of the system are inevitable, social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society" Discuss. You should write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Let's read now.
"Although abuse of the system are inevitable, social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society"
Discuss.
Social welfare is an essential element of an advanced society. Good systems are ...
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flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.85 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.586 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 297 350
No. of Characters: 1439 1500
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.151 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.845 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.609 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.85 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.586 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.27 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5