The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of threetypes of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporling the main features,and make co mpariso ns where relevant.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three
types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporling the main features,
and make co mpariso ns where relevant.

The pie chart compare the proportions of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar consumed in four typical meals of American people.
It is clear that the unhealthiest meals are at dinner and snack due to consuming too much sodium, saterated fat and added sugar compared to breakfast, the most healthy meal.
Americans eat the big number of sodium and saturated fat at dinner accounted for 43% and 37%, respectively. Likewise, the highest consumption of added sugar is at snack numbered at 42%.
In contrast, breakfast is the healthiest meal compared to others only around 16% in consuming three nutrients. Lunch is less healthy than breakfast but still healthier than dinner and snack. The figure of thest nutrients at lunch is higher than that at breakfast but still lower much than the data of that at dinner and snack.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the unhealthiest'.
Suggestion: , the unhealthiest
...n four daily meals of American. Overall, unhealthiest meals are dinner and snack whereas brea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, likewise, so, still, whereas, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 595.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 116.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12931034483 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64949852792 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.2703642616 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0653107586091 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335197701811 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027472919496 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0445101062032 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207950284557 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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