Should children play for fun or compertition
Obviously, children should play for the competition. it starts with basic physical exercising for the body whether you train hard and be fit or casually spend time. Nowadays kids tend to spend most of their time in electronic gadgets and not playing. The schools must encourage the students by inducing play time as a part of the career or graduation. taking the sport as not a serious thing makes them do the act with less arrogance and thereby get natural relaxation. If in the same case lets assume that they are appearing for a competition, then they prepare well train themselves and find a chance to know the true potential in them and this also allows the kids to get a chance where they can concentrate on the areas they're lagging in.
The contest need not be always picking best three of all or running for survival of the fittest rather it could be much rewarding and encouraging to the attendees and making them realise that every act is worth.
Once children get accustomed to competing games, they tend to accept failures take remedies and involve in actions that can improve their growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 407.700716846 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73575129534 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48327650339 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652849740933 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2103740132 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160723521998 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943520256376 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156256057443 0.0737576698707 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849951381024 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542536410392 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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