Different people have eclectic way of representing their ideas and the way of their representation results in giving the originality form of their own. The prompt claims that originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before rather it means to put the old things together in new ways and this holds water. In my opinion, i mostly agree with the prompt as we can see many new discoveries and inventions are the based on the old ideas and here are the reason .
To begin with, we have come so far in the field of technology and the inventions. These inventions and technologies are the result of the coalesce of the old ideas and views given by our precedent generations. Alexandar Graham Bell invented a unique machine to communicate between two people at different places. And from the root of his ideas, the machine has taken its new form from telephone to mobiles to smart phones. The use of telephone was limited within the people just for communication but now, it has become one of the basic need for people where they can find the whole world within. It has been a source of entertainment, an informative device and many more. This all was possible from Graham bell ideas and this invention is one authentic one which gave a new form.
Our great scientist Albert Einstin discovered "The theory of relativity" in his time. This theory introduced the idea of relativity which played the role of a seed of a plant that later developed into a huge colossal tree in the field of science and technology. The scientist have launched so many satellites to the outer space so that we can receive information from the outer world. And all the information are possible to reach upto us only from the implementation of the theory given by our great scientist. This idea gave a new originality to the discoveries in today`s world. If this idea wasn`t discovered, then may be today we would be in another world without any knowledge of these discoveries.
However, every inventions can`t be made original by putting the old ideas. Some of the discoveries are limited within the first copy. We can see so many inventions and discoveries which aren`t based on the old ideas. The development of new art and literature form, different genre of musics and films and many more.
In conclusion, we can come this far from the utlitization of the old ideas and modifying them according to our motley needs and giving them a novice form of the creation.
- Many of the world s lesser known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct GRE Issue 8 65
- Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways 58
- "A ten-year nationwide study of the effectiveness of wearing a helmet while bicycling indicates that ten years ago, approximately 35 percent of all bicyclists reported wearing helmets, whereas today that number is nearly 80 percent. Another study, ho 33
- The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records." 50
- Two studies of amphibians in Xanadu National Park confirm a significant decline in the numbers of amphibians In 1975 there were seven species of amphibians in the park and there were abundant numbers of each species However in 2002 only four species 88
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83216783217 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82385438657 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498834498834 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4055015653 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245767414238 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705386218359 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133244300068 0.0758088955206 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148163541909 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163665922593 0.0667264976115 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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