Dear Sir,
My name is Kumar S Sampad and I am a resident of Danforth Area in Toronto. I am writing this letter in response to an advertisement published in The Daily Star regarding the requirements of volunteers in Charity works for the people on the street suffering due to heavy ice storms in the last couple of days. I am interested to help those victims and owing to this, I would like to give a short brief about my past records.
I have graduated in social science and involved in lots of non-governmental activities for the last 10 years. In fact, these kinds of activities give me an immense mental pleasure in many ways. In fact, as a human, it is our responsibility to help mankind in need. In lieu of this, last year, I have served myself for the flood-affected people in the Ottawa Area to ensure basic supply of food and other staffs along with the Red Cross team.
However, for this charity event, I can raise fund from the local people and a bulk amount of winter clothing can be managed shortly. Moreover, the used winter jackets and boots, as well as gloves, can be collected from nearby regions. Additionally, I can assist to distribute those materials with my personal vehicle. I know, different social organizations are coming up with their wholehearted efforts, but I cannot wait to help the people in my ways too.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Kumar S Sampad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a short brief about my past records. I have graduated in social science and in...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...responsibility to help mankind in need. In lieu of this, last year, I have served ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67450980392 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78518627587 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3670550726 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6923076923 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158014998555 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045836456332 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349344337969 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885519867968 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149949992905 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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