It is common today that road accidents has become one of the most significant factor leading to the death of many people. In this essay, I will shed light upon the causes and solutions to decline the disasters on roads.
There are plethora of reasons which are responsible for occuring car crashing on the road. To begin with, majority of humans are consuming more drugs,alcohol and using mobile phones when they are driving. Consequently, narcotic are not only affect their health but also increasing the chances of accidents. For exemplify, a study was carried out a hospital in New York, USA and it was observed that more than 60% of cases of automobile accidents were reported on Friday and Saturday evenings. Also, alcohal was detected in blood samples of almost 80% of drivers. Moreover, teenagers are exuberance to use a vehicles in a hastily by doing stunt and dangerous activities. In this way, mortality rate becomes higher.
Furthermore, roads are not properly constructed in some area which is ruin the car easily. After that, humans are showing their recklessness towards the maintenance and repair of automobile machines. It is the one main reason of escalating the crashing on road. Last but not least, human beings wants to earn adequate money swiftly. Therefore, they starting to overload their lorries which is normally stuck to other vehicles when drivers are not able to use breaks on highways.
On the other hand, if the government and individuals are taken some steps mutually than it will be surely decline the smashing up of cars. Firstly, government should ban mobile phones while in driving case. By putting camera's on roads are beneficial to put an eye on each and every activity on road. Secondly, younsters should be aware about the traffic rules and also encourage them to do safe driving. Thirdly, individuals try to get more knowledge about the driving and use vehicles when they passed in practical and theoritical test. Fourthly, government should impose higher fine and prisonment to those who violate the rules unintentionally.
To sum up, catastrophic situations can be handled if the government take strict actions against the illegal activities and on drivers who are using excess amount of beverages which becomes helpful in saving the society from deterioration.
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Suggestion: , alcohol
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Suggestion: a vehicle; vehicles
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uals try to get more knowledge about the driving and use vehicles when they pass...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...about the driving and use vehicles when they passed in practical and theoritical...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13756613757 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7580047065 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6485931108 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4761904762 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95238095238 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145204484565 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040402411589 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567238977124 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786179825945 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435739902058 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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