People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Large cities are luxurious to stay along with it, People living there have to encounter many offenses and barriers in daily activities. In most of the cities, pollution and high traffic are the major hindrances. In my opinion, the government should motivate individuals and provide facilities to move in the suburbs.
The cities have lots of vehicles, most of the cities in the world have a huge problem regarding traffic management, as well as it produces unwanted materials to the environment. It leads to the pollution of the cities, those factors have a large effect in day to day activities. Along with this, delay in the schedule for the job, different airborne as well as water born diseases are growing. Though it is not a problem that arises itself, human itself is developing and suffering. Massive crowd in cities makes people unwell, living in have an excessive chance of being depressed. For example, in Dehli, most of the people are attempting suicide because of their city life and the way of living they prefer, over 300,000,00 population relay in a city also it is too congested.
Though, city life has lots of problems as well as joy, if the administration doesn't push individuals to the rural areas they even cannot manage it well.An effective decision regarding migration from higher authority helps to balance urban as well as rural population. People start to live in the city than the village population density won't be equal to an area. Developing universities, colleges, hospitals, and all infrastructure can change people mind towards migration also providing extra facilities helps to twist mind about city life. The Regional towns should be more facilitated than cities and some of the attractions should be developed their so that people want to stay. Australia even has changed his policies regarding immigration last year because of the huge population density in cities like Sydney, Canberra, and Melbourne.
In conclusion, In spite of problems like high traffic and pollution people are living in cities because of facilities, Good reform from the government can change people way of living, So improving the facilities towards suburbs town will attract people to stay there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14404432133 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75277138975 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520775623269 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9864014461 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374335161247 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11544462421 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767946128427 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237335089608 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212119508726 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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