Nowadays most people spend less time in their homes. What are the causes of it? What are the effects on society and individuals?
Currently a lot of people around the world are found spending lesser and lesser time at their homes. There are certain factors which have led to, people leaving their place of solace in an abandoned state. This essay we would find out as to why people are not found in their dwellings and what are the effects of people choosing to live out of their homes for a longer time.
The main reason primarily why people spend most of their time out of their home is because nowadays the husband and the wife, both are a working couple, choosing to work overtime in order to generate more and more income. Not out of need but basically because of excessive greed. Moreover, the children also when they walk into an empty house they find it pretty boring so, to cheer themselves up and further more to seek companionship the children meet up at club houses or cafes. Besides, the adult working couple also prefers to spend their night outs socializing in bars and lounges for example the temptations club, tryst pub, the bar stock exchange bar etc are famous night clubs in business circles to socialize as they go with a mind-set that it would help them develop business contacts as well as alcoholic drinks seem to soothe their tensed nerves. In such houses you can only find the house help greeting you at the door which seems to make a person feel highly unwelcomed.
The harsh effects of deserting their abodes seem to negatively influence the society, for people don’t choose to communicate much with their family members although they find ample amount of time to socialize in person or even on the net, with their business associates, friends and even total strangers. This finds them very lonely even a crowded house. To illustrate people belonging to elite families usually land up with marriage counselors and psychiatrist to solve their basic problems which could have been resolved even by bonding and confiding with each other at home.
To sum up, nevertheless, there are a couple of factors responsible for an isolated home, still with preventive measures all of us could take certain steps too not feel completely lonely and alienated in today’s world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 909, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to greet' or 'greet'.
Suggestion: to greet; greet
...houses you can only find the house help greeting you at the door which seems to make a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, as to, for example, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85254691689 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42611200269 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576407506702 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.1896863578 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.833333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0833333333 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210292168809 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765316062209 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852246115774 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123705450271 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105521140449 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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