Reports are suggesting that over the past decade, internet has been using widely, and it almost reached to a point where we could say internet is one of the daily needs for living. It is often being said that, websites can be a great place to communicate with friends and family however; there are not enough resources to find the relevant information or news. I shall discuss on both views and will provide my opinion on it.
Netizens use the World Wide Web for many reasons and keeping in contact with friends and families is one of the many reasons. There are numerous social media websites, which make our job easy to talk with anyone over the world. Apart from this, people use the web to find out the information, to read the news, or to book the tickets and what not. Everything and anything can be obtained if we have internet connection in our hand.
When it comes to the checking information there are quite a list of excellent websites are available for example, Wikipedia, or TimesNow or BBC Journal. On the other hand, we could see many of low graded websites, which claims that they have trusted information. However, it is not true. Most of these websites operate to attract the visitors and as a result, they gain the profits. If anyone wants to gain the knowledge, then they should have to be careful in order to land on trusted websites.
Nevertheless, internet has been become one of the key resource and it can assist any human being in number of ways. On a whole, cyberspace is a great platform either to connect or to get information, if we use it wisely.
- In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent Why do you think this is and what can be done about it 84
- You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the Opportunity Shop in the shopping center has cheap second-hand furniture. Write to the shop owner. In your letter•Describe what you need•Ask whether they have these items•Wha 70
- Some people think competitive sport is important for a child s education Others think it has negative effects on children Discuss both views and give your opinion 63
- You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book Write a letter to to him her In your letter apologize for the mistake find out how important the book is to 78
- You are looking for a part-time job.Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter•introduce yourself•explain what sort of job you would like•and say what experience and skills you have 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, then, apart from, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59507042254 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47551739476 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9495217207 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2142857143 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171384965028 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524461621518 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473647865547 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099392478657 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063184185551 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.