According the recent surveys, crime has rate been moving uphill and it’s been increasing each year over the last decade. Any country is no exception to it; even developed countries are also having the same problem with crime rate. The recent surveys also showing that, juvenile crime rate is also increasing and it is one of the major concerns in many nations. This essay will dive into the causes of crime and suggest remedies to mitigate the rise in criminal activities.
The reasons for crimes are countless. However, drugs, alcohol, anger, social problems and property disputes play the major rule. Some people are forced to do crimes because of their financial status and to survive they unintentionally do wrong things. Poor countries are the examples are such crime rates. To solve the crime problems, governments can either focus on draconian punishments, or improve employment opportunities, invest in good housing projects and tackle drug and alcohol abuse. Government should also impose strict laws on weapon culture. The law of providing gun license came into the picture as a part of own security to the people. However, the dark side of the gun licensing is increasing the crime rate.
Illegal trafficking of narcotics is also seated as one of the main cause for crime rate and it is a proven fact that, juveniles attract more to the drugs. Therefore, government should also focus on pegging the children from drugs. They should run awareness campaigns at schools and increasing of funds for drug and alcohol rehabilitation programmers would help reducing the crime rate. The government should also focus on increasing employment opportunities in poorer areas.
In conclusion, crime is a major issue, but cracking down on offenders with a harsh penal system is not the only way. These problems can be solved through the government providing jobs and funding which should raise living standards and dramatically reduce crime levels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...l rehabilitation programmers would help reducing the crime rate. The government should a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18987341772 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68224532688 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.711978559 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20747869251 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718453068381 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566387437939 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124793588818 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416043389468 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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