TOPIC # 31 Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place

In olden days people used to change their homes from one location to another location for their cultivation purpose. This is called "Shifting cultivation". Now-a-days people are moving around for many reasons. The reasons varies as the person varies. But according to me I would prefer to change from one place to another if the situation demands.

Let us take for example California state in United States. The cost of living in California state is somewhat more when compared to other states of United States. So students who are from middle class background will not prefer this state...

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Sentence: Therefore, by considering all the reasons above listed, I wpuld prefer moving to other place.
Error: wpuld Suggestion: would

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Score: 25 in 30
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 265 350
No. of Characters: 1295 1500
No. of Different Words: 142 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.887 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.551 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.377 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.588 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
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