Few Progenitors believe that assisting kids with their homework is right, while others think that kids must perform their school assigned responsibilities independently. In this essay, I shall emphasize on both views and suggest my view point.
As we all know and have experienced our own beautiful childhood. We can sense back and recall the tender school learning experience, similarly challenges and difficulties we have gone through. Firstly, one needs to understand that children are with different personality traits and carries distinct individual nature among themselves. For an instance, to slow learners, parents assistance while doing home work is necessary. Moreover, It is a boon reassuring comfort completing the work.
For example, the Cambridge child psychology unit has come up with a research study revealed that 76 percent of children showed dependencies and assurance while answering to simple questions. This exemplar clears that maximum number of children of tender age needs parents assistance while completing any task.
Secondly, the children who fall under the rest 24 percent not only were self reliant answering questions and doing tasks independently but also exercise leadership skills and were independent and quick learners. Although, these are some qualities which for some children are gifted, however, for some acquired at later stage of life.
In conclusion to sum up both the views, I believe parents assisting children doing their homework is not only assuring but also enabling the inter-connection between school and home together. Whereas, for God gifted clever extrovert kids there is nothing much to worry about and let them be on their own, but supervision is required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...some acquired at later stage of life. In conclusion to sum up both the views, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not only assuring but also enabling the inter-connection between school and home...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54924242424 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91021275323 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674242424242 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5070349248 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282952279726 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810222725455 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613381427008 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14217687197 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718641416119 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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