Over the past two decades, motorways or highways have become the most useful transportation method over the world and no country is an exception to it. Governments are spending billions of money to develop new motorways. However, it is a known fact that this trend comes with some cons attached to it. In this essay, I will discuss about drawbacks with expressway and will try to come up with few possible solutions. <!--break-->
I could not agree to the fact that, thruways are easy access to hassle free travel without much traffic on the roads. Because of no traffic, there is a possibility that drivers can hit maximum speed of their vehicles. As a result, they might loss the control over the car or truck and their lives could be at stack. This should be avoided in order to provide safety of the travels. One of my friends drove his vehicle at 140KM/hour though the speed limit was only 100KM/hour. Though there was not any incident has happened, his driving license was forbidden by the high patrol officer. In many countries, there will not be rest stops on highways. Due to this, travelers are forced to drive too much of distance at a stretch. This has been one of the main reasons for accidents on the broadways. Another drawback, which comes with expressway is, environmental effects. That is, in order to concentrate new highways governments are opting for deforestation as a result wild life, flora and fauna affected largely. <!--break-->
To overcome all this issues, certain mechanisms should in place and bureaucrats have to come up with sophisticated guidelines. First, they should install speed guns on broadways for every 100 miles and should impose high price tickets who ever crossed the speed limits. Second, will have to consider installing rest stops or refreshment areas or play station. Therefore, the drives can take breaks every now and then in a journey. Third, will have to build the thruways in such a way that it will not impact the environment.<!--break-->
Briefly, expressways can be easy access to cover long distance but are dangerous in few ways too. In my opinion, there is a possibility to overcome the entire drawback it can bring and we can make highways as a safe and secure transportation method.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
.... Therefore, the drives can take breaks every now and then in a journey. Third, will have to build...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, as for, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89005235602 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8613032478 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581151832461 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3782528598 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9523809524 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95238095238 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0574533271516 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0156991834303 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0207525749186 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.033647261235 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149310622872 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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