People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on individuals and on society?
Globally, people are working day and night in order to evolve as the best species. Since there is a limited amount of time that everyone has, they try to squeeze a lot in one day. This has reduced their resting hours which makes them an easy target to other problems. This essay will discuss some reasons why humans are spending more time waking up and its related impacts.
To start with, many developing nations witness a trend wherein individuals work tirelessly and turn into a workaholic beast because they are impatient to achieve everything in a short span of time. At times, it is not possible to get anything at once, but the greed makes a man restless and gives him very less time to sleep. Moreover, technological advancements play a vital role in reducing the nap hours of people. For instance, studies show that 68% of the overall population are glued to their television set or handheld devices for more than 5 hours per day, which disturbs their sleep cycle.
As a result, there is an increase in the number of sufferers of diseases like hypertension, high blood pressure and worst of all- obesity making an impact on the overall immunity system of mankind. It indeed makes public aggressive and irrational while decision making. Further, this trickles down via genes to the future generation who turn out to be insomniac. This not only makes them over-sensitive but also an easy victim of depression.
To sum up, as a human brain needs appropriate time to rejuvenate itself after numerous instructions it imparts during the day, it becomes essential to take a prolonged break to help the body revitalize itself for the next day. By following such routine folks can observe a healthy and tension-free lifestyle for an extended period of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... tension-free lifestyle for an extended period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, as a result, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87707641196 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65162070667 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677740863787 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4729165605 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0789166647394 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225002427806 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342582699648 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.040213887614 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477073007343 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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