The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
The bar graph illustrates sales of jeans in the unit of thousands of pairs for two different companies in next year in Turkey. While, pie chart depicts the value of estimate market share in three different company at the end of period.
Overall, sales of jeans for both companies namely, Jack and Jones and mango company will increase over the period value of market share nearly similar for both this companies.
From the bar chart, the figure for selling jeans in January will account for about 150 thousands pairs and 450 thousands pairs for mango company and Jack and Jeans company respectively. Furthermore, the trend of selling jeans will decrease gradually for mango company but adversely the trend of sale will decline significantly to 250 thousands pairs of jeans. From February to December, the figure for it will be predicted that mango company to sale there Jeans will stood at 100 thousands of pairs compared with 250 thousand of pairs for Jack and Jones company, before estimated that it will experience a steady rise until the end of the year, accounting for around at 600 thousand of pairs and 900 thousand of pairs for both company respectively. While, Jack and Jones will be most popular among people at the end of year.
It can be seen from the pie chart that value of company will be forecasted in Turkey by following year. Market value of mango company will be predicted at 20%, which will lower than half for other companies stood at 60%. Whereas only 30% market value will represented for Jack and Jones company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erent companies in next year in Turkey. While, pie chart depicts the value of estimat...
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stand'
Suggestion: stand
... mango company to sale there Jeans will stood at 100 thousands of pairs compared with...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '100 thousand'.
Suggestion: 100 thousand
...mpany to sale there Jeans will stood at 100 thousands of pairs compared with 250 thousand of pai...
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Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'represent'
Suggestion: represent
...60%. Whereas only 30% market value will represented for Jack and Jones company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83018867925 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39869431672 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437735849057 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.2216142937 43.030603864 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360791552063 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187947455625 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967776022224 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282800888703 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136766051055 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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