TOPIC # 43 why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities?

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TOPIC # 43 why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities?

Some people have no sense of fear putting themselves in hazardous situations, while others are very cautious even to alter their lifestyle. I believe only a minority of people have a great tendency towards perilous activities as they are fond of excitement, they do it as a profession, or they are seeking fame.

First, some people are just passionate about adventures. They easily get bored of routine entertainments, sports, and the ordinary life. They are also keen on everything that brings great thrills to their lives, and takes them away from the normality. For these individuals, frightenin...

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