TOPIC # 35 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, a concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.

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TOPIC # 35 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, a concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television.

A live performance has an especial spirit making it totally different from television broadcasts. I totally agree with this point of view that attending a live performance is much more amusing than watching the same event on television as the presence of vast crowd, performers, and the hall or stadium’s features make it unique.

First, presence of a large population surrounding you multiplies the joy of the performance. During the sporting events, the spectators burst into spontaneous cheers or sigh altogether. At plays or operas, they greet the casts or the opera singers with incredible ...

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