The maps : the plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment.
The maps illustrate the current layout and proposals for the redevelopment of a sports center of a university.
It is noticeable that this center is expected to be more sizeable with new recreational facilities.
At present, behind the reception, there is a 25-meter pool with the changing room and the seating on either side, including the gym toward the rear of the building. In addition, there are two separate outdoor courts in the west and east wing of the main building.
According to the second map, the two outdoor courts are planned to be merged with the building. In the place of the western court, a large leisure pool will be constructed, while a sports hall and two dance studio will be built on the site of the other outdoor court. There will also be additional changing rooms, a sports shop and a café on either side of the entrance. The gym is planned to double in size and remaining features is going to stay unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...isure pool will be constructed, while a sports hall and two dance studio will be built...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'studios'.
Suggestion: studios
...cted, while a sports hall and two dance studio will be built on the site of the other ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 393, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: double
... of the entrance. The gym is planned to double in size and remaining features is going to stay...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69277108434 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64869180866 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4730926392 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.375 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119370012168 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542970453831 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486279810485 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673283178691 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675031319279 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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