It is mandatory for the students that they give more attention towards all subjects rather than one. However, critics believe that it is best for teenager if they more focus on subjects in which they are interested. This essay will discuss both these statements in the following paragraphs, along with my opinion in conclusion.
on the one hand, it is best for all the pupils, if they learn all the subject in school: English, physical education, computer etcetera.it is because, the students will get more knowledge about the different kind of things, aspects and resources as, in school numerous kind of subjects are taught to pupils. Which leads to increase in knowledge of learners. In addition to it, the understanding of every subject is compulsory for them in order to understand the conversation of other people and to communicate with other religious' people. Because of this, discrimination problem would be vanishe from the nation.
On the flip side, the teenager should focus on the subject in which they are best or in which they have more interest because, if the students concentrate on the few subjects rather than the more, then they could score good in their academic subjects and can make their career strong and get the opportunity of the professional job. For example, if a student have interest in science field then he or she can achieve his or her goal in that specific field: medical science. Which assists in choosing their dream job without any confusion.
In conclusion, according to my point of view, the students should learn all the subjects in school because, it creates more opportunity for them in the different fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69340694187 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530685920578 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7634172388 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.909090909 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327274277117 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11179773837 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103948874757 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201246621235 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564426541922 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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