majority of people believe that this is directly related to financial success whereas, others are against of it they believe that the happiness is exist in the other factors.this essay will discuss both these viewpoints and state my opinion along with the conclusion.
To begin with happiness, it can be achieve with the usage of money. This is because individuals can buy the thing which gives joy to them. example, food shelter and clothes which are the basic necessities for the people of their survival. Which leads to blith in their life. adding more to it, financial assets assists to fulfill their dreams and wishes as, individuals has the happiness to buy a car then he or she can achieve his dream with the help of money. Which result to the pleasure of a person. even, money help in gaining more respect and attention to people in community which are comes in the form of joyfulness.
Instead of financial success the achievement of other thing also leads to bliss among individuals. to illustrate this, a sports man is happy in winning the first prize and students has the blithe in getting good marks in their academic subjects. So, satisfaction consequences in pleasure. apart from this, good health of people is the major reason of happiness since, healthy individuals live happily where is, all the rich people cannot if they are suffering from numerous diseases like cancer, it does not matter if they have more money.
in conclusion, undoubtedly money is a key element of blitheness but there are numerous factor which make the person Joy physically, social and mentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9405204461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58899982257 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583643122677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7238570653 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221268547063 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642331427131 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11329807913 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154061940454 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169732436474 0.056905535591 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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