In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that tourism has strong influence on the growth of developing countries. In my opinion this statement is more realistic and worth to believe. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the main features of this essay before deducing a final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that tourism brings benefits to the growth of economy of developing nations. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that tourism promotes cultural heritage and civilization, which is beneficial for the developing nation to grow in proficient manner. As a prime example, natural beauty in Thailand is one the biggest example of it, where through out the year tourists all around the world visit and explore the beauty of nature. Therefore, tourism is one the way for Thailand to develop itself as a strong nation among all.
Another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that for underdeveloped nations tourism is the way to build strong relations with other countries and it would be beneficial for them to promote the local heritage and trade relationship with other countries.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned propounds that tourists industry for developing nations is not the only mean to promote economy but also beneficial for people to know the different cultures. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24152542373 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83353575554 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5512595936 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.7 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188128655559 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780985246461 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770352123175 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104360791007 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442813705585 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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