People emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new road for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that governments face the pressure from public to build an advance transport system for vehicles rather to focus on elimination of over crowded roads. In my opinion, I personally think that this Government should focus on constructing new roads to over come the issues arise from heavy traffic. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the main features of this statement before deducing any final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that construction of new roads is mandatory to address issue of overcrowding. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that in this contemporary world technological advancements have introduced variety of vehicles of different types. Therefore, this leads to a the overcrowding of cities and it can contributes a lot of issues, which include noise pollution, overcrowding and congestion of roads. As a prime example, developed countries have faced this problem to larger extent and therefore governments have adapted different strategies to resolve this issue.
On the other hand, another pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that governments should try to improve the roads and public transportation by providing economical fairs for public buses and railways. Hence this strategy would control all these mentioned issues in more proficient way.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that Government is the ultimate authority who adapt best suitable approach which not only control overcrowding of cities but also other address other related issues. Therefore, ideas that will bring benefits would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53231939163 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98777550517 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634980988593 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2588038026 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.272727273 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187917225371 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645469351852 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699091262848 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105843661384 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602869195321 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.