The three pie charts show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1987,1991,and 2001.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate yearly expenditure on various expenses by a single UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
It is obvious that, teachers’ salaries were the largest spending in all of the given three years, while the least money went to insurance.
According to the first pie chart, in 1981,40% of the total spending represented by teachers’ salaries. Another 28% were made up by other workers’ salaries. The figures for resources and furniture and equipment were the same, both at 15%, with the remaining 2% being accounted for by insurance.
Between 1981 and 1991 the amount of m...
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