A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures.
Write a letter to the college head. In your letter tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about.
Explain why would they be of interest to the students.
Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give a talk.
Dear Sir/Mam,
I am writing this letter with regard to my speech on our country to students of other cultural background.
I will begin with the enriching history of our nation with a special mention of aesthetic monumental buildings. Then I will briefly talk about geographical structure including flora and fauna. Finally, last and major topic would be the economy: the way forward, that will make the students realize potential of our country in terms of trade and technology.
My talk would resonate well with the current year theme of international day. Students will be mesmerized to see all the talk in a three dimensional presentation. They will be hooked to a special wizard who will pose quiz for them. Also, overall experience will help them in writing their travelogue.
I would be grateful if you would help us in arranging the power backups and wireless mike for a flawless speech. Also, drinking water bottles for our crew would be an added advantage.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully
Amit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, finally, if, look, so, then, well, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98843930636 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71170356586 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8167383431 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9166666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4166666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15852667965 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601858313739 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395870009988 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847597475727 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166181435477 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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